This was a delightful sequel. I don't know what it is about this kind of humor that resonates with me, but it's absolutely absurd and I love it. The animation and artwork has definitely improved since the last Sonic animation you worked on. The bashing on Sonic Boom at the end was great too. Overall, this is a worthy successor and definitely hilarious.
My only gripe is that the original plot ended too quickly, so the last three minutes focused on the Sonic Boom segment. But hey, nothing's perfect. Great work, I enjoyed it and had plenty of laughs.
Glad you seen the quality difference. I guess it did end it a bit abrupt Just couldn't figure out how Chris would of out done Sonic to get him under water. Maybe he threw in a ring in or a chillidog who knows. Glad you had some laughs. That is what really counts, right?
I like the idea, the delivery of the majority of the lines and it definitely gives off the Seinfeld vibe. The animation is good, and the modelling and texture work is great.
I would have liked to see more shots from different angles. An example of this was the repetition of the shots of Mario and Luigi talking to each other. It shot back and forth which seemed a bit dull. I know this isn't an action genre kind of animation, but maybe a tracking shot where the camera follows a character walking somewhere, while talking or doing something, It just seemed very static to me. The dialogue between Mario and Luigi, while funny, lacked something. Luigi's voice actor did a good job, but there were times I could hear a lack of enthusiasm.
Overall, this is great work, and fresh too. I really enjoy your unique spins on different video game franchises. Keep up the good work.
The voice acting could be a bit better and the artwork could be cleaner, but overall this was a good piece. It was funny and the animation itself was good too. I really liked the lip sync you did; you had their lower jaws moving when they spoke. Little things like that give an animation some much needed life and some realism.
Now this is really nitpicking, but when your character with the JP shirt turns around, the letters on his shirt are mirrored and they appear backwards. You may want to work on consistency by making a new symbol to replace that character's body so this doesn't happen in future animations. Other than that, I think you did a good job!
I really enjoyed this one. I could tell where it was going when we hit the final Pokemon, but it was still clever and pretty funny. The animation was nice, and the character modeling was great too! The textures for each model gave the whole cartoon a pastel/cartoony style that I really like.
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I like the direction you went with it. It was random and I was not expecting it. Your voice acting was not bad at all, it just sounds like you recorded it in an empty room with a bad mic. That's one of my only critiques.
Your animation is not bad and your artwork is nice. The movements were clean but limited, but considering this is your first attempt at Flash, things can only go uphill from here. I liked it, I hope to see more of your work.
I really like this animation. The voice acting is great and funny, the art style pops out nicely and the character designs, while simple, are great for some laughs too. The animation isn't spectacular, but it works. The humor comes through strong at the end of it. Good work, 4/5.
It's a little weird, and some of the writing is illegible so I can't read what's going on half the time. The lack of dialogue didn't help, but a short without any sounds or any voices can work so long as your viewer has an idea what's going on. I had no idea what was happening or what the story was, but I liked it because it made me laugh a few times. I appreciate random and nonsensical humor. It's one of my favorites.
The animation fluctuates from good to indistinguishable art every now and then, so I recommend practicing consistency with your drawings. But other than that, I enjoyed it! 3/5.
Well, at least you got entertained off of it :3
Thanks for the constructive critism! I will try improve thanks to your comment!
I don't think this belongs on Newgrounds. A demo video for your game would be more suitable to upload on another site, like Youtube. You don't have to wait to pass judgement or get approval to put it on your channel, and you can easily reach a wider audience. There are some places (like my school) that block Newgrounds, so you're limiting your options.
As for the actual game, it looks alright. The graphics are nice, the game looks responsive enough, but the main character's walking animation looks really strange. I can't tell what it's supposed to be. Still, I'll check it out and support the project, but for now, I think you should upload this somewhere else, and with more visual appeal instead of just gameplay. Advertise it, narrate it, do whatever it takes to catch people's attention.
It's pretty good, the animations and designs are nice. It's just a bit odd seeing all of these animations spliced up into different pieces for a short one minute video. I'd rather see the individual works, but this is still a nice "demo reel", if you can call it that.
I can see what you were trying to do and it works. But not a whole lot. The jokes and the dialogue could be funnier if the voice acting was enthusiastic and believable. The artwork, not the greatest, and neither is the animation, but the visuals are enough to represent what they are.
Truthfully, this seemed very flat and uninspired. You can make this so much better if you put in a ton of effort into the dialogue, timing, artwork and voicework, in case you decide to make an Educational Animal Video 3.
You are right. I don't have enough patience to spend enough time on my videos. I rather spend like 10 hours on each video and make one per week instead of spending several months and get them really good.
That's is my problem I guess. Speaking of that, I have already made video no 3, and it's about the same quality as this one, I think it turned out a bit better though, but that may be just my personal opinion. I will get the answer in a week when I upload it.
I'm not sure I would be able to make that much better videos than this though, even if I spent way more time, as I am limited by my own rather poor ability, and the phone app I use to animate.
Thanks anyway for a fair review!
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